2021 高考英语全国作文范文

2021 高考英语全国Ⅰ卷试题大小作文试水文

第四部分 写作（共两节，满分 40 分）

第一节 （满分 15 分）

你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 读报的经历；

2. 喜爱的栏目；

3. 期望和祝福。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Youth and Me

【参考范文】

For the 10th Anniversary of YOUTH / On occasion of the 10th Anniversary of

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YOUTH, I want to share my reading experience.

Youth has accompanied me for three years during my high school. It involves all topics that senior students are interested in and leads us to feel the wonderful outside.

As a loyal reader of YOUTH, I am always absorbed in columns on teenagers from which I can get inspiring stories and gain much pleasure from exciting news.

I sincerely hope that YOUTH can make greater progress and attract more readers to share their stories.

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YOUTH, the most popular school English paper among us students, is celebrating its 10\" anniversary. Looking back on those impressive days with YOUTH, I am full of thankfulness to it. It was the first semester when I was trapped in learning and feeling greatly depressed that I was introduced to YOUTH. The moment l dived deeper into YOUTH, I was deeply attracted by one of its columns, the Window to the World, through which I harvested a lot. Whenever I was down, I would turn to YOUTH; whenever l had any question in English, I would refer to YOUTH. The insightful and profound articles and abundant materials concerning English learning cast light on all my embarrassments, raising me up. Thanks to YOUTH, I became so confident that I picked up my courage to face my dilemma

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and strove hard for improvement. Thanks to YOUTH, not only were my horizons widely broadened and campus greatly enriched, but my English was gradually improved, hence contributing to my overall promotion of my study. Thanks to YOUTH, I became what I am today, living up to my parents and teachers' expectations.

Here I would like to convey sincere gratitude and my best wishes to YOUTH. May YOUTH the brightest future.

读后续写分话题语料库整理：亲情篇

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE

The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.

The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and

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put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.________________

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.______________________

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主要内容: 双胞胎Jeff和Jenna准备在母亲节为母亲做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的早餐，母亲节当天，他们先煮粥，然后把面包放进鸡蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二块面包将要煎成功的时候，沸腾的粥把火熄灭了，厨房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也烫伤了，Jenna帮他用冷水冲手的时候闻到了面包烧焦的味道。

续写思路:续写第一段增加了新角色——爸爸，第一段主要写双胞胎在失望的情况下，爸爸如何帮助他们完成为妈妈准备的早餐。而第二段的开头是双胞胎端着早餐上楼，然后叫醒妈妈。第二段主要写妈妈看到早餐后的反应和母子之间的互动。主题为子女对父母的爱，属于亲情类。

迁移了平日亲情类作文素材。

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Dad, sorry, it was such a mess.” Jeff murmured, lowered his head in shame(亲情类有关的表示道歉的动作描写). “No time to make mum a breakfast now.” Jenna cried with regret and guilt overwhelming her like endless tides. (亲情类有关的表示内疚的描写).Patting them gently on their shoulders（亲情类有关的表示帮助的动作描写）, father said in a warm voice, “Darling, it's love that counts. Let’s do this again together!”To their relief, with the guidance of father, they successfully made the breakfast.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Surprise! Happy mother’s day, mummy!” They said, throwing their arms into the air.（亲情类有关的动作描写）Shocked and proud, their mother said in a sweet whisper,

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“Thanks, my kids.”（亲情类有关的动作描写）Then, mother bit into the French toast, saying that it was the most delicious one she had ever tasted. At that time, Father entered the room and said in a loud voice that he also wanted a bite. All of them laughed with happiness, the laughter echoing in the room.（亲情类话题结尾的自然结尾） / A golden shaft of sunlight, filtering in through the window and, together with love between family members, warmed up two young souls.（亲情类话题结尾的环境衬托式）/ Radiant laughter burst out from the room constantly, and the whole family was enveloped in overwhelming happiness. （亲情类话题结尾的原文呼应式结尾）

读后续写分话题语料库整理：亲情篇

下水作文：

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He whispered to them with a smile,“Wow, you two really surprised me, can I join in you?” The twins nodded with a relief. Father fetched the medicine box and applied some medicine to Jenna’s hand. “We planned to cook Mum a meal, but we messed up.” Jenna said, “It’s ok. We can do it again before your mum wake up.” Dad began to help them clean the stove and boil the porridge. Jeff put in another slice of bread and this time everything was perfect.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day, mum.” The twins said, “Thank you so much for what you did for

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us.” “Thank you, my dear.” So delighted was she that she hugged the twins tightly, tears of joy welling up in her eyes. “If it weren’t Dad’s help, we couldn’t finish it.”, Jenna added. At this time, father came upstairs. Their father threw arms around them and hugged them tightly. They feel blissful as if they were in possession of everything. Indeed, love should be made known to loved ones.

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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. His jaw dropped open at the sight of the great mess. After the twins explained that they were trying to make a surprise for their mom, he smiled, put some ointment on Jeff’s hand and helped clean up the stove. “Dad, can you help us with the breakfast?” Jenna asked. “Sure! Now I am officially a member of the Mother’s-Day-surprise team!” Under their father’s instruction, Jess stood by the pot and stirred the porridge from time to time while Jenna carefully fried the French toast. “Eyes on your task!” the father reminded. Before long, the breakfast was ready.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Before she asked, Jenna and Jeff said in chorus, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Blushed, Jenna said, “Mom, we would like to say thank you. Thank you for bringing us to the world, which makes everything possible. Thank you for being a loving and supportive mom. You are always there for us when we are cast down, and you are happier than anyone else when we achieve something, however small the

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accomplishment is.” With tears welling up, the mother threw her arms around them. Never has she been more pleased and proud. (188)

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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. His appearance immediately nailed them where they were, dumbfounded . Then much beyond their expectation and to their great relief, he didn’t fly into a rage . Instead he went over, saying he understood the situation and instructed them to deal with the mess. Pot cleaned, the two brothers repeated the same process, but this time under the expert and patient guidance of their understanding father. Soon the delicious and inviting French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Their father then slipped back into the bedroom. 88 words

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When seeing her nose sniffing hard, they could hardly contain their excitement. A glance at the plates and bowls on the tray and Mum realized all that happened. Tears welling up in her eyes, she excitedly awoke her husband still “snoring”, who pretended to open his drowsy eyes, muttering he was still in a sweet dream. Gathering around the well-designed breakfast, the whole family was immersed in happiness and gratitude. 72 words

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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “No worries J&J, let me help you,” Father comforted the twins. Eventually Jenna managed not to weep. “What a mess! It seemed so easy to cook.” Jeff said dispiritedly. “You need to practice, practice makes perfect.” Father encouraged him. Within a couple of minutes, the breakfast was ready. The kids could wait no longer to go upstairs, but their father suggested to do it 30 minutes later as their mother went to bed last night very late. Soon time was up. (81)

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Seeing and smelling the food contentedly, Mother said, “What a treat! You little minds are so caring, and with the hot burners you little minds are so daring, how did you make it?” Jenna answered, “Dad helped us, and Jeff burned his hand.” Mother cried, “Oh no, it must be very painful, huh?” “Painful? Yes, but no pains, no gains.” Jeff said proudly. At this moment, their father joined them and said to his wife: “Eliza, I envy you.” Jenna comforted her father cheerfully, “No worries dad, mum has her bed-breakfast today, and you’ll have your bed-dinner when Father’s Day comes.” (101)

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