2020年高考英语作文范文汇总及解析
全国卷一
你身边值得尊敬的人+理由
学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：
1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介；
2、说明理由。
注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当 增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、结束语已为你写好。
写作指导：
审题注意点：
1.最好写自己身边尊敬或爱戴的人，名人，抗疫英雄应该不算身边的人吧？
2.简介最好包括外貌，职业等基本情况，但要简明扼要，不宜拓展太多，毕竟要点2才是重点。
3. 充分拓展尊敬的理由，要点2是文章的body。有理有据，使人信服。
4.文章标题和第一句话已经给出，注意衔接和紧扣标题。
The people I respect
Thereare many people respectable around us. The people I respect most is my aunt, acharming woman of medium built, who was born into a rich family and received a good education. Now she is an excellent doctor and specializes in internalmedicine.
As we all know, COVID-19 broke out in March of this year in Wuhan city, which was in urgent need of doctors and nurses.Every one across our country was so frightened at the epidemic that nearly none dared to go to Wuhan city. However, at this crucial moment, it was my aunt that risked her life to do voluntary work without hesitation, which amazed me so much. I show great respect for her not only because of her courage but also due to her selfless contribution to our homeland. Besides, she doesn't care about money as well as fame but cares for others. Her life attitude also makes a great difference on me.
All in all, my aunt sets a good example for me. And I do learn a lot from her. That's the reason why I respect her most.
全国卷二
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a
mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not only…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
全国卷三
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编一个短剧，请你写一封邮件给外教miss Veans，请他指导你们。邮件内容包括
1. 情节简介
2.指导内容，
3.商定时间和地点。
参考范文
Dear Miss Veans:
I am Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.
Our play will be based on the text \"horse\". The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse. But the artist misunderstood the king, and in the end the king forgave him because of his effort. My classmates and I are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronounciations. We will have a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can come and give us some advice.
Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely
Li Hua
北京卷
第三部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 这是一篇写人的信件，要求抒发自己对人物的观点并进行说明．所以用第一人称来叙述，时态以一般现在时态（叙述影响）和一般过去时态（叙述他的生平）为主．内容分成三部分：一 开头打招呼引出下文；二 内容着重介绍人物贡献及对我的影响；三 结束语．
高分句型：
1．As for（至于） my favorite figure in Chinese history，it must be Wei Yuan，a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty（Wei Yuan的同位语）．
至于历史上我最喜欢的人物，那肯定是魏源，他是清末伟大的思想家．
2．He（主语），in his book（状语），Haiguo Tuzhi（Maps and Records of the World）（book的同位语），introduced （谓语）modern technologies and ideas to China（宾
语）
在他《物种起源》这本书里，他把现代的技术和观念带入我国
范文
Dear Jim，
It's great to hear from you．I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history（点题，说明写作目的）．
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history，it must be Wei Yuan，a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty（高分句型一）．He，in his book，Haiguo Tuzhi（Maps and Records of the World），introduced modern technologies and ideas to China（高分句型二）．That opened our eyes to the world．In fact，he inspires me to major in English in college，to be a bridge between China and the world．（介绍魏源的成就和影响）
Interested in knowing more？I can find you some books!Just let me know（表达愿意更进一步帮忙的愿望）．
Cheers!
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节（20分）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律self-discipline
I am Li Hua, the class leader of class one, grade twelve. During the pandemic, students in our class carried out a research about self-discipline. At first, the efficiency of the students were very low, and greatly affect the learning outcomes of students. To solve this problem, me and some of the students met offline for a brainstorm meeting. After coming up with possible solutions, all classmates had an online meeting during which we decided on a specific plan. After carrying out the plan, the study results of all classmates saw obvious increase, and our teacher
was happy with the result.
上海卷
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，前几日，你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天音乐会。面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因，王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华，请写一封信说服王磊和你起参加。
（1）请你从解决他的问题
（2）还有音乐会的重要性两方面
写一篇文章建议他参加这次活动！
信件写作的基本框架
Greeting:
Use an appropriate greeting (Dear Mr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+last name, or Dear + first name)
Opening paragraph:
Use set phrase to begin your letter and say why you are writing (How are you doing? It was nice to hear from you...etc)
Main part:
The content of your writing
Closing paragraph:
State anything you want to emphasize.
Use set phrases to end your letter
Signature endings:
Yours, all the best, best wishes...
议论文的基本框架
Introduction：
Briefly introduce the topic you're going to discuss.
Say how you feel about.
Main part: (two paragraphs)
Choose two main aspects of the issue and write one paragraph on each.
Explain your ideas/points, and give examples if possible.
Conclusion:
Sum up by stating your overall opinion.
同学们只要把这两个框架融汇起来合理使用，就是本文的基本大纲。
示例1
Dear Wang Lei,
It’s been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it’s still worth our efforts.
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers’ autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!
In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some
solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
示例2
Dear Wang Lei,
How are you doing these days? You’ve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on Friday. It seems to me what’s holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles.
Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day.
Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways’
service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that this concert is such a major event that you would regret if you didn’t come.
Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldn’t it be amazing to see your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them!
Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
天津卷
书信：介绍成人礼。
1.回顾成长历程;
2.观看校友抗疫视频;
3.自己的感受和未来期望。
作文解析：
“成人礼”特定表达：
1、成人礼：coming-of-age ceremony
2、Our ceremony fell on May 16. fall on 在某一天举行
3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up. 不能用18 years old 做主语
4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals. 注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。
5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表达。
6、We owe so many thanks to our parents. owe sth. to sb. “欠，欠恩、欠情”
7、The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility. be intended to do 旨在
素材
成人礼coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈向成人阶段的仪式，它标志着告别孩童时代(childhood)，进入成年期(adulthood)。在成人礼上，通常都要进行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中国一些地方，成人礼上还流行穿汉服(traditional Han costumes)，祭拜孔子(consecrate Confucius)等习俗。
coming-of-age ceremony就是成人礼，是在少男少女年纪满18岁时举办的象征迈向成人阶段的典礼。男孩要进行capping ceremony(冠礼)，女孩要进行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄礼)。举办成人礼示意一个人已经come of age(成年)，在阅历了puberty(青春期)之后，实现了从adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改变。
范例：
Dear XXX
I am glad to receive your email．Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday．In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday．At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on．Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently．And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us．Finally we put on wonderful
performances singing and dancing．We learned a lot from the activity．I think it’s very important for us．I will remember the day in my life．
Yours
Li Hua
Dear XXX
doubt that a rite of passage was pretty significant in people’s whole life.
Great changes have taken place in a rite of passage in China with the changing times. Only a few people take part in the Mitzvah. It is obvious that a rite of passage is far less epidemical than that in the old times. People at age of 18 often wear Han Chinese clothing with serious face and in high spirit now. A rite of passage represents the independence of children. Besides, even some children would receivegifts and congratulations from their parents and other relatives.
In recent days, there is a trend to hold a rite of passage for all 18-year-old children for the hope that children will be more responsible and brave in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
江苏卷
BBC拍的杜甫纪录片，很受外国友人的欢迎。
以中国题材纪录片为写作话题，要求学生分析中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。
The documentary Dufu made by BBC, which deals with life experience and poetry creation of this great master, wins widespread recognition among
foreigners. Its exquisite production also captures Lijiang and Suhua's heart.
Why does such Chinese documentaries as Dufu appeal to foreigners? Firstly, China's rising international status and groundbreaking development catch the whole world's attention. These curious audiences long to probe the underlying reason behind. Therefore, they turn to some iconic figures like Dufu for an answer. By exposing themselves to this great poet's life experience, foreign audiences are better acquainted with Chinese political, ideological and economical system, thus gaining a better insight into contemporary China and its rapid growth.
Secondly, the high-quality production of BBC also contribute to Dufu's popularity. BBC poured tons of effort into translating Dufu's poems, shooting his birthplace and famous historical sites such as Xian and inviting famous British actor Mckellen to cast as Dufu. All these efforts made the inaccessile poems easily understood by the western audience.
To conclude,considering western viewers' curiosity about China as welll as BBC's fine production, the popularity of Dufu among foreigners is no coincidence.
浙江卷
假如你是李华。你校爱尔兰外教Peter因病回国休假。请你给他写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
1.询问Peter近况;2.告诉Peter班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。
Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。
As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。
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